Dominik you started late and have caught up with most of the tasks set, but there is a real lack of detail throughout your blog. I will go through the elements and suggest improvements to make: Production schedule - complete and embed (looks like a screen shot?) Case studies - see my comments - as NME is incomplete and you seem to be creating a magazine of a different genre maybe analyse XXL instead? Plus media kits for both to show your understanding of target audience. Your college magazine is here and looks good, your evaluation is far too short, you are meant to be reflecting on what you did and what you need to improve on, taking into consideration audience feedback.
Your presentation is here, it is brief and now is the time to fill in the gaps - layout, colour schemes and house style need to be considered as well as journalism and your photo shoot.
Overall, you just need to start posting all decision and the work you do, you need to do a bit more work though.
Dominik you started late and have caught up with most of the tasks set, but there is a real lack of detail throughout your blog. I will go through the elements and suggest improvements to make:
ReplyDeleteProduction schedule - complete and embed (looks like a screen shot?)
Case studies - see my comments - as NME is incomplete and you seem to be creating a magazine of a different genre maybe analyse XXL instead? Plus media kits for both to show your understanding of target audience.
Your college magazine is here and looks good, your evaluation is far too short, you are meant to be reflecting on what you did and what you need to improve on, taking into consideration audience feedback.
Your presentation is here, it is brief and now is the time to fill in the gaps - layout, colour schemes and house style need to be considered as well as journalism and your photo shoot.
Overall, you just need to start posting all decision and the work you do, you need to do a bit more work though.
Amy