your magazine is good the images look really good the clothing suits the genre the cover page is a bit plain you should try adding some pull quotes to attract the reader its a bit too plain, your contents page font size can be increased and you should try resizing the images on the contents page cause they look too streched
I like your front cover and how you have made the colours of your font match what your cover star is wearing, but i think you should make the image of your cover star a bit bigger so it covers your masthead slightly. I think you should have made all the letters in your masthead upper case. I also like the layout of all your text and how you kept it all simple,
I like the consistent colour scheme of your magazine and how the red compliments the outfit of the model. However i think the font size on your contents page should be a bit bigger so it is easier to read.
I like the colour scheme it works well with what the artist is wearing however you could structure your work by using a variety of fonts and sizes to use the space effectively also the positioning of the skyline is weirdly placed and i think it should be positioned more to the left. Also you could position your date of your magazine underneath the masthead on the right and use more pull quotes to help give an insight of what your magazine has.
your magazine is good the images look really good the clothing suits the genre the cover page is a bit plain you should try adding some pull quotes to attract the reader its a bit too plain, your contents page font size can be increased and you should try resizing the images on the contents page cause they look too streched
ReplyDeleteI like your front cover and how you have made the colours of your font match what your cover star is wearing, but i think you should make the image of your cover star a bit bigger so it covers your masthead slightly. I think you should have made all the letters in your masthead upper case. I also like the layout of all your text and how you kept it all simple,
ReplyDeleteI like the consistent colour scheme of your magazine and how the red compliments the outfit of the model. However i think the font size on your contents page should be a bit bigger so it is easier to read.
ReplyDeleteI like the colour scheme it works well with what the artist is wearing however you could structure your work by using a variety of fonts and sizes to use the space effectively also the positioning of the skyline is weirdly placed and i think it should be positioned more to the left. Also you could position your date of your magazine underneath the masthead on the right and use more pull quotes to help give an insight of what your magazine has.
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